Reflection and Movement Critique

Today in class we had a critique of our reflection piece. The students had to point out things we could improve on. For my piece a few suggestions were made. My paper is not clean and must be cleaner for future reference. Also, since the xbox was darker than a lot of the composition it made it appear more important than it actually was. Next time I will need to lighten it up so it appears less important. My face on the other hand could’ve used more shading to make it more obvious than it was. The face was the intended focal point so for the next time, it needs to be shaded. Like the xbox, my chair in the piece could’ve been shaded lighter as well, so for future reference, the chair must be lighter as well.

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